Mentor application: HotCoffeeMug
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You usually come across as coherent in-game, so this is rather surprising.

It looks like you're using too many connectives to piece words together into a gigantic single entity, consider replacing some of the "and"s and other connectives with punctuation!

Definitely consider resubmitting your application - knowledge and experience wise you definitely qualify.
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RE: Mentor application: HotCoffeeMug - by Zafhset - 03-11-2017, 04:30 AM
RE: Mentor application: HotCoffeeMug - by fosstar - 03-11-2017, 01:37 PM
RE: Mentor application: HotCoffeeMug - by Haine - 04-30-2017, 04:20 AM

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