Goonhub
12-30-2013, 07:55 PM
Sorry man, but I've got to point a few things out and THEN add my input.
Firstly, the recommendation thing, that's for like, admins/current mentors who said you're a good dude who should be mentor.
Second, the first paragraph of your application were just about how you found out about mentors.
Third, you've stated you aren't good at a large chunk of the jobs, and didn't mention the rest.
Fourth, I'm going to say that, while some humor is appreciated in applications, you seem to try to be funny in parts, but it feels forced and falls flat.
Fifth, capitalize your I's, use apostrophes, fuck
Last things last: I've never seen you ever before. This is probably because you play on LLJK #1. Going off your application alone, I'd say you either need to..
A. Redo it, cover ALL your experience (or just address this in a response) or..
B. Take some time, get some more experience, do this again.
Firstly, the recommendation thing, that's for like, admins/current mentors who said you're a good dude who should be mentor.
Second, the first paragraph of your application were just about how you found out about mentors.
Third, you've stated you aren't good at a large chunk of the jobs, and didn't mention the rest.
Fourth, I'm going to say that, while some humor is appreciated in applications, you seem to try to be funny in parts, but it feels forced and falls flat.
Fifth, capitalize your I's, use apostrophes, fuck
Last things last: I've never seen you ever before. This is probably because you play on LLJK #1. Going off your application alone, I'd say you either need to..
A. Redo it, cover ALL your experience (or just address this in a response) or..
B. Take some time, get some more experience, do this again.