Goonhub
08-11-2024, 11:09 AM
That wraps up the basic first draft for this. I'll be spending the next few days working through it all. Please if you have any thoughts let me know. Some issues so far:
- Basic spelling, format standardisation and little things like a bad habit of switching between "armory" and armoury"
- A few individual re-writes of weapons to better reflect their functionality.
- Continuity and lore checks for proper company association. I have almost certainly made some huge plotholes that will be fun to pick out.
- Work out how to break this up and put it in the library in a way that won't flood it with a ton of nonsense that drowns out other submissions, or if there's a better approach to do this. There's been a fun few suggestions.
- Some time for anyone bored enough to read the whole thing to spot something awful that I haven't.
When that's done, I'll put up some kind of unified final draft or something that isn't spread into a million fragmented pieces and it's likely from there that'll be it. A few people have expressed interest in doing similar creative writing excercises so I'm very much looking forward to seeing what others come up with. Huge thanks to those who have been reading along and especially those who have given some feedback!
- Basic spelling, format standardisation and little things like a bad habit of switching between "armory" and armoury"
- A few individual re-writes of weapons to better reflect their functionality.
- Continuity and lore checks for proper company association. I have almost certainly made some huge plotholes that will be fun to pick out.
- Work out how to break this up and put it in the library in a way that won't flood it with a ton of nonsense that drowns out other submissions, or if there's a better approach to do this. There's been a fun few suggestions.
- Some time for anyone bored enough to read the whole thing to spot something awful that I haven't.
When that's done, I'll put up some kind of unified final draft or something that isn't spread into a million fragmented pieces and it's likely from there that'll be it. A few people have expressed interest in doing similar creative writing excercises so I'm very much looking forward to seeing what others come up with. Huge thanks to those who have been reading along and especially those who have given some feedback!