09-15-2023, 06:30 AM
(This post was last modified: 09-15-2023, 06:34 AM by Sord213. Edited 1 time in total.)
Most of it looks really good, but I'm not a fan of the section on Mind Control. Seems kinda meh that you're just to release them. "They just beat the captain to death and shoved him in the gibber, but it's ok cause they were a rev/mindhack and they're good now". I'd prefer something like "Reduced sentencing based on the severity of the crimes committed."
Edit: I'd also personally think it's funny to add something relevant to clown crimes. "Comedic Crimes" in special circumstances possibly offering reduced (or greater, bad clown) sentencing based on the crime, talking about crimes committed in the effort of comedy. NT employs the clown, they understand that sometimes crime is funny....
Edit: I'd also personally think it's funny to add something relevant to clown crimes. "Comedic Crimes" in special circumstances possibly offering reduced (or greater, bad clown) sentencing based on the crime, talking about crimes committed in the effort of comedy. NT employs the clown, they understand that sometimes crime is funny....