"Bob's server thoughts and questions and ideas."

[warcrimes]

Do I need to try to break things up into separate paragraphs?

You do. 
You absolutely do. 
Instead of carrying your post like a, uhm, y'know .... like a uh, a conversation, but like um, really full of uh .... filler and pauses? 

- Itemise your ideas 
- Write clearly
- Outline your major points and features.

AND THEN discuss what it is you're talking about. 
People don't need, uhm, y'know... like um  -Just say it.